In 3/4A we have been working on persuasive writing. We’ve been debating whether we’d rather swim with a shark or a crocodile, have super sight or super hearing, be our age forever or wake up an adult, or whether living in the city or the country is best. Sometimes choosing is difficult, so in our latest piece we have had a few “fence-sitters” who have chosen to advocate for regional areas; between city life and rural country life.

By now, we’ve gotten pretty good at making introductions that “SOaR” – they use a Sizzling start, stating our Opinion and listing our Reasons. We hope these introductions make you wish that you are able to read our whole piece!

“Are you Goldilocks? The city is too busy, the country is too quiet. Well then, can I show you the best bowl of porridge? Regional is the most convenient place to live, there is diversity and there are many great things for you to enjoy.” – Lindsay D.

 “Have you ever been to the city? I feel that out of the country and the city I would choose to live in the city because of all of the intelligent and specialized hospitals and doctors, there’s lots of exciting places to explore and lots of activities to try.”- Emma L.

“You’re standing on a balcony on a peaceful morning, staring at a beautiful green paddock. I would rather be in the country because you can have a wonderful childhood, a better lifestyle and it’s more affordable.” -Logan M.  

“Imagine you are in the shops- it’s not too loud and not too quiet. I prefer regional to live in because the population is just fine, they also have convenient transport and they also have a good sense of community” -Nafieth N.

“Imagine roaming free…I prefer to live in the country because the country is relaxing and the city is bad.” -Lars

“If I could wish upon a star I would wish to be a city person. The city has everything! You have many entertainment choices, better opportunities at schools and jobs and there are also less flies and other pests!” -Bianca

 “Imagine living somewhere so peaceful, quiet and calm. What’s a better place to live than regional Victoria? I think regional is the best place to live because you have so many choices, it’s very convenient and you can do all of your hobbies!” -Evie M.