Year 3/4 P are working on Alliteration Poems this term. Below is a few pieces they have written about the concert last week.

The classic class clowns had loads of candy before the concert. The creative class calmly walked on the stage and danced crazily. In the middle of the concert, Emma collapsed and luckily didn't cry. A couple of clowns got to cartwheel because the music was so crazily catchy. Their costumes were remarkable. By Amelia

Clearly, the clowns were the cleverest act.  All of the crying clowns lined up.The clumsy clowns became confused with their creation, but no one could tell. I loved watching the classic clowns get confused in their crazy dance. By Gina

The mysterious monkeys marvellously marched on stage to music. Monkeys munched on mints that were massive. By Huxley

Callum the crazy clown wore a colourful costume. Chaotic clapping had the crowd crying. By Callum

Lions lay in the land lots looking from the stand. By Declan

The classic class clowns carelessly collapsed on stage during the school concert in their colourful costumes with their crazy hairdos. The girls were keen on not losing their clean hats. The clowns’ concert piece was a classic. By Annabelle

Connor the confused clown cried because Carter the ringmaster said that there is a crazy big contrast between him and the creative clowns. Carter declared that the creative clowns were capable of coming up with creative clues, but  Connor’s were clumsy, careless and chaotic. By Connor

Clowns at the concert in crazy colourful costumes created by Kate. Crowds were clapping at the conclusion of our colourful, clumsy, clown dance. By Jack

Super strong people stomped. Smart strong people swam. Surrounded strong people surged. Significant strong people surfed. By Levi

Crazy concert clowns collapsed on the colourful concrete to calm down.
Clever Cooper couldn't control Callum coz it was too complex. The contrasting conditions continued to cause complications. Those crazy concert clowns couldn't calm down. By Lars